From 9ae6c3f97af2bba8964f3f3b332c2999e173bf53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Amy=20de=20Buitl=C3=A9ir?= <amy@nualeargais.ie>
Date: Sat, 13 Sep 2025 14:50:23 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] temp

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 index.html                                       | 16 +++++++++-------
 source/recipes/devshell/nix-non-flake/main.adoc0 |  3 ++-
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 1e292dd..e8c9b7f 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -4738,10 +4738,10 @@ However, you can use any of the flake reference styles defined in <a href="#flak
 <p>The <code>hello-nix</code> <a href="https://codeberg.org/mhwombat/hello-nix">repo</a> provides a <code>default.nix</code>.
 If the derivation in that file allows us to supply our own package set,
 then our flake can call it to build <code>hello nix</code>.
-If instead it requires <code>nixpkgs</code>, it is not pure and we cannot use it.</p>
+If instead it requires <code>&lt;nixpkgs&gt;</code>, it is not pure and we cannot use it.</p>
 </div>
 <div class="paragraph">
-<p>If the file begins with an expression such as</p>
+<p>For example, if the file begins with an expression such as</p>
 </div>
 <div class="listingblock">
 <div class="content">
@@ -4761,7 +4761,9 @@ Instead, we have to write our own derivation (see <a href="#devshell-impure">Sec
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-<p>so we can call it, passing our own package set as an argument (see <a href="#devshell-pure">Section 10.4.6.1, &#8220;If the nix derivation does not require nixpkgs&#8221;</a>).</p>
+<p>then it accepts a package set as an argument,
+only using <code>&lt;nixpkgs&gt;</code> if no argument is provided.
+We can use it directly to build <code>hello-nix</code> (see <a href="#devshell-pure">Section 10.4.6.1, &#8220;If the nix derivation does not require nixpkgs&#8221;</a>).</p>
 </div>
 <div class="sect4">
 <h5 id="devshell-pure">If the nix derivation does not require nixpkgs</h5>
@@ -4825,9 +4827,9 @@ Instead, we have to write our own derivation (see <a href="#devshell-impure">Sec
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-<p>Lines ??? fetches the git repo for <code>hello-nix</code>.
+<p>Lines 5-8 fetches the git repo for <code>hello-nix</code>.
 However, it is not a flake, so we have to build it;
-this is done in line ???.</p>
+this is done in line 15.</p>
 </div>
 <div class="paragraph">
 <p>Here&#8217;s a demonstration using the shell.</p>
@@ -4835,7 +4837,7 @@ this is done in line ???.</p>
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 <pre class="nowrap">$ hello-nix # this will fail
-bash: line 52: hello-nix: command not found
+bash: line 53: hello-nix: command not found
 $ nix develop
 $ hello-nix
 Hello from your nix package!</pre>
@@ -4927,7 +4929,7 @@ Hello from your flake!</pre>
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-Last updated 2025-09-13 14:35:08 IST
+Last updated 2025-09-13 14:41:08 IST
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diff --git a/source/recipes/devshell/nix-non-flake/main.adoc0 b/source/recipes/devshell/nix-non-flake/main.adoc0
index e8e9331..35c144b 100644
--- a/source/recipes/devshell/nix-non-flake/main.adoc0
+++ b/source/recipes/devshell/nix-non-flake/main.adoc0
@@ -64,7 +64,8 @@ $# EOL
 [#devshell-impure]
 == If the nix derivation requires `nixpkgs`
 
-We need to write the derivation ourselves, using `default.nix` as a model.
+In this case, we need to write the derivation ourselves.
+We can use `default.nix` as a model.
 Line 15 should be replaced with:
 
 [source,nix]